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Overall, C02 output per individual in the UK and Sweden began the highest but witnessed a decline toward the end of the period.

Overall, C02 output per individual in the UK and Sweden began the highest but witnessed a decline toward the end of the period. EQrB
Overall, C02 output per individual in the UK and Sweden began the highest but witnessed a decline toward the end of the period. Conversely, Italy and Portugal started with relatively low emissions but saw considerable increases by the end of the timeframe. Overall, C02 output per individual in the UK and Sweden began the highest but witnessed a decline toward the end of the period. Conversely, Italy and Portugal started with relatively low emissions but saw considerable increases by the end of the timeframe.
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, C02 output per individual in the UK and Sweden began the highest
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but
witnessed a decline toward the
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end
of the period.
Conversely
, Italy and Portugal
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started
with
relatively
low emissions
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but
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considerable increases by the
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IELTS academic Overall, C02 output per individual in the UK and Sweden began the highest but witnessed a decline toward the end of the period.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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