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Overall, C02 output per individual in the UK and Sweden began the highest but witnessed a decline toward the end of the period.

Overall, C02 output per individual in the UK and Sweden began the highest but witnessed a decline toward the end of the period. EQrB

Overall, C02 output per individual in the UK and Sweden began the highest but witnessed a decline toward the end of the period. Conversely, Italy and Portugal started with relatively low emissions but saw considerable increases by the end of the timeframe. Overall, C02 output per individual in the UK and Sweden began the highest but witnessed a decline toward the end of the period. Conversely, Italy and Portugal started with relatively low emissions but saw considerable increases by the end of the timeframe.

Overall
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but
 witnessed a decline toward the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtopedgedeadlinetermpoint
end
 of the period. Conversely
, Italy and Portugal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 with relatively
 low emissions This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 considerable increases by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtopedgedeadlinetermpoint
end
 of the timeframe. Overall
, C02 output per individual in the UK and Sweden began the highest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 witnessed a decline toward the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtopedgedeadlinetermpoint
end
 of the period. Conversely
, Italy and Portugal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 with relatively
 low emissions This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 considerable increases by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtopedgedeadlinetermpoint
end
 of the timeframe. 

IELTS academic Overall, C02 output per individual in the UK and Sweden began the highest but witnessed a decline toward the end of the period.

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