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The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. 8kjk
The pie chart illustrates the outcome of an inquiry of population who went on visit to four different type of tourism centers in Britain in the year 1999, in addition to a table displaying the ratio of the most visited attraction sites in Theme Parks. Overall, Theme Parks had the highest percentage of visit in the given period with a ratio of 38%, while Museums & Galleries followed with just a slight difference of 1%, in contrast to Wildlife Parks and Zoos which the least visit with 9% of people visiting. Moreover Blackpool pleasure Beasch outpaced other attraction centers in Theme parks to emerge as the most visited center with 47% ratio, whereas, Chessington Worls of Adventures and Legoland, Windsor were the least visited with both having 10% ratio. However Historic Houses & monuments had people which amounted to 16% people visiting but could not be compared to Theme Parks and Museums & galleries. Other places in the Theme Parks which were visited by people in the period given were Alton Towers and Pleasureland, southport which had a rotio of 17% & 16% respectively.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999.

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