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The graph illustrates the average expenditures of US consumer on both cell and residential phone services from 2001 to 2010. Summaraze and compare things where relevant

The graph illustrates the average expenditures of US consumer on both cell and residential phone services from 2001 to 2010. Summaraze and compare things where relevant e5qoW

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