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illustrated the international tourism, dairy products and meat products of southland in two different years and future projections for 2025.

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The chart illustrated about the international tourism, dairy products and meat products of southland in two different years and future projections for 2025. Overall the international tourism rose significanly in 2000 and 2020 and istimated will go up again in 2025 whilst diary products rose sharply in 2020 yet fall slightly in 2025 furthermore meat products dicreased over the periods. It can be seen that international tourism has amout of southland’s main exports in aproximately 8 bilion and experienced upward trend become 9 billion in 2020 and 2025 10 billion while diary product from 7 billion rise suddenly 10 in 2020 but fall down below 10 billion in 2025 on the other hand meat products suffer downward trend over the three years, 6 billion in 2000 go down among 6 and 5 in 2020 and dropped again 5 billion in 2025. Meat products become the lowest purchase of southland’s main exports.
The chart illustrated about the international tourism, dairy
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southland
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years and future projections for 2025.

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the international tourism rose
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significanly
in 2000 and 2020 and
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istimated
will go up again in 2025 whilst diary
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rose
sharply
in 2020
yet
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slightly
in 2025
furthermore
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meat
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products
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dicreased
over the periods.

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that international tourism has
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amout
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southland
’s main exports in
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aproximately
8
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bilion
and experienced upward trend become 9
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billion
in 2020 and 2025 10
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billion
while diary
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product
from 7
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billion
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rise
suddenly
10 in 2020
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fall down below 10
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billion
in 2025
on the other hand
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meat
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products
suffer downward trend over the three years, 6
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billion
in 2000 go down among 6 and 5 in 2020 and dropped again 5
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billion
in 2025.
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Meat
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become the lowest
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southland
’s main exports.
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IELTS academic illustrated the international tourism, dairy products and meat products of southland in two different years and future projections for 2025.

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6.0
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