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The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.

The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990. ljjDb

overall, the consumption of fish and chips declined over the provided period whereas the quantity of pizza and hamburgers that were eaten increased In 1975, the most popular fast food amongst Australian adolescents was fish and chips, being eaten 100 times a year. The numbers were far higher than those of pizza and hamburgers, which were consumed approximately 5 times a year. However, apart from a slight rise again from 1980 to 1985, the consumption of fish and chips gradually declined over the 25-year timeline to end at just under 40 in 2000. on the contrary, teenagers ate the other two junk foods at much higher levels. Pizza consumption increased gradually until it surpassed the consumption of fish and chips in 1990. It then remained stagnant from 1995 to 2000. The major rise was seen in hamburgers during the 70s and 80s as the numbers increased, exceeding those of fish and chips in 1985. It finished of leveling at the numbers of the beginning of fish and chips, with a consumption of 100 times a year

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