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the diagram below show how heat is lost

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The diagram below illustrates heat loss and energy wasted which happened in a house because of the air circulation. According to the picture, in the downstair, a dry vent and crawl space create the air enter the house. However, the windows on this floor leak the air out of the house. On the other hand, this house has three rooms on the second floor and an electrical outlet in the toilet causes the air to leave this building. Also, the windows in the middle room and the kitchen room have the same function that making the air leak out of the house. Another thing, in the top floor, there are so many atmospheres out from the several parts there such as bathroom fan vent, recessed lights, and attic hatch. As a result, the heat is lost since the air getting out of the house. Overall, it is clear that the heat can lose and the air can leak because there is some ventilation making air gets into and out of the house.
The diagram below illustrates heat loss and energy wasted which happened in a
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circulation.

According to the picture, in the
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downstair
, a dry vent and crawl space create the
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air
enter the
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house
.
However
, the windows on this floor leak the
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air
out of the
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house
.
On the other hand
, this
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has three rooms on the second floor and an electrical outlet in the toilet causes the
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air
to
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leave
this building.
Also
, the windows in the middle room and the kitchen room have the same function that making the
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air
leak out of the
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house
.

Another thing, in the top floor, there are
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so
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many
atmospheres out from the several parts there such as bathroom fan vent, recessed lights, and attic hatch.
As a result
, the heat
is lost
since the
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air
getting out of the
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house
.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the heat can lose and the
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air
can leak
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because
there is
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some
ventilation making
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air
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gets
into and out of the
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.
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