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The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015

The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015 5M3V
The rendered table depicts information regarding the educational troubles faced by children in two primary schools in two specific years 2005 and 2015. Overall, it is noticeable from the table all the study related problems faced by school A experienced a downward trend, expect reading ability. Similarly, all educational related problems for school B kept on almost the same. For School A, the student had a maximum number of problem in the following instruction with 42 per cent while reading ability was least with 22 per cent in 2005. Also, Concentration in the lesson had the second most number of difficulty faced by students with 40 per cent and verbal expression of ideas and listening skill had the same 35 per cent. In 2015, the percentage of concentration in the lesson was least at 18 per cent and the problem of handwriting was the highest with 15 per cent. For School B, The problem of handwriting remained the same for both the years with 7 per cent and it was the least per cent problem in 2015. furthermore, the number of students who faced a problem in Concentration in the lesson remained unchanged steady at 15 per cent and it was the most number of per cent in the year 2015. After that student had problems in listening and the following instruction was the same with 12 per cent.
The rendered table depicts information regarding the educational troubles
faced
by children in two primary
schools
in two specific years 2005 and 2015.

Overall
, it is noticeable from the table all the study related
problems
faced
by
school
A experienced a downward trend,
expect
reading ability.
Similarly
, all educational related
problems
for
school
B
kept
on almost the same.

For
School
A, the
student
had a maximum
number
of
problem
in the following instruction with 42 per cent while reading ability was least with 22 per cent in 2005.
Also
, Concentration in the lesson had the second most
number
of difficulty
faced
by
students
with 40 per cent and verbal expression of
ideas
and listening
skill
had the same 35 per cent. In 2015, the percentage of concentration in the lesson was least at 18 per cent and the
problem
of handwriting was the highest with 15 per cent.

For
School
B, The
problem
of handwriting remained the same for both the years with 7 per cent and it was the least per cent
problem
in 2015.
furthermore
, the
number
of
students
who
faced
a
problem
in Concentration in the lesson remained unchanged steady at 15 per cent and it was the most
number
of per cent in the year 2015. After that
student
had
problems
in listening and the following instruction was the same with 12 per cent.
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015

Academic
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4 paragraphs
229 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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