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The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012.

The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. kK5O

The bar chart provides the amount of people who visited in National Gallery, Victoria and Albert Museum and British Museum from 2007 to 2012. Overall, the proportion of visitors in those three museums have reached the highest point in 2012, while the lowest number of travelers was in 2009 and 2010. National Gallery presents a significantly increase during 2007 to 2012. It can be seen that in 2007, National Gallery has a number of visitors in the last place. However, it has grown in every year until 2012, National Galley has become the most museum that have a plethora of visitors. Victoria and Albert Museum has the largest number of people in 2007 and 2008. Nevertheless, it has been decreased rapidly in year 2009 and reach the lowest point in 2010. In 2011, it slowly rosen up until 2012, but Victoria and Albert Museum was the museum which have the least individuals to visited. In 2007, British Museum was in the second place of those three museums. But in 2008, it has been sharply fallen and keep constantly in 2009. In 2010, British Museum has slightly grown until in 2012, it was the second museum which has the highest number of visitors.

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