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The graph below shows average Carbon Dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom,, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2000.

The linear plot depicts standard output of Carbon dioxide discharge per individual in the European countries over a forty-year period. It can clearly be seen that the emissions of Carbon acidic gas in United Kingdom and Sweden started with elevated amount of the stated ratio. But toward the end of the period they witnessed a decline. Meanwhile, the two territories named Italy and Portugal began with relatively low proportion, it just describe that per person in these countries manage to abase the needed amount of the given data. Yet they saw considerable increases by the end of the timeframe. To begin with the statistics covering the outlay of United Kingdom, the figure reveals that United Kingdom had the amount of emissions comprising towering nearly 11 metric tones in 1967. After a decade it still remain the same statistics, in 1987 it was calculated as approximately 10 metric tones, then about 3600 years later it shrink about o. t metric tone and was accounted as 9. 5 metric tones. Expectedly it declined steadily by the year 2007 and was estimated as 9 metric tones. Furthermore discharge of Carbon acidic gas in Sweden was almost 8. 5 metric tones in the year 1967, ten years after it was rose to a peak and was saw above 10 metric tones. Unexpectedly it was declare to nose dived by the years 1987 and rate as absolute 7 metric tones, the section of CO2 emissions stood at around 6 metric tones for the year 1997. Finally by the end of the period they face a sharp dwindle and just rated as 5 metric tones. On the other hand, the output for Italy accounted for just over 4 metric tones, 1977 the year it started to surge and was as top of 6 metric tones as estimated, demonstrated a similar rising pattern by 1987 remain as top of 6 metric tones. 1997 it began to change and was guessed as more the 7 metric tones, at the end of the quantities the year 2007 it increased sharply and was announced as nearly 8 metric tones. Moreover, the data for Carbon Dioxide release for Portugal overall was 1 metric tone in 1967, 1977 the year the metric started to sky rocket and was approximately 2 metric tones, it started to boost in 1987 and was roughly 3 metric tones. After another 10 years it added 2 more metric tones and was written as 5 metric tones. Lastly, between 1997 and 2007 the details of the outlay was plateau more or less 5 metric tones, they spot balloon effect within the years 1967 to 2007.
The linear plot depicts standard output of
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Carbon
dioxide discharge per individual in the European countries over a forty-year period. It can
clearly
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seen
that the emissions of
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Carbon
acidic gas
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in United Kingdom
and Sweden
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started
with elevated amount of the stated ratio.
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But
toward the
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end
of the period they witnessed a decline. Meanwhile, the two territories named Italy and Portugal began with
relatively
low proportion, it
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just
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describe
that per person in these countries manage to abase the needed amount of the
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given
data.
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they
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saw
considerable increases by the
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end
of the timeframe.

To
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begin
with the statistics covering the outlay
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of United Kingdom
, the figure reveals that United Kingdom had the amount of emissions comprising towering
nearly
11 metric
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tones
in 1967. After a decade it
still
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remain
the same statistics, in 1987 it
was calculated
as approximately 10 metric
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tones
, then about 3600 years later it
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shrink
about o. t metric
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tone
and
was accounted
as 9. 5 metric
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tones
.
Expectedly
it declined
steadily
by the
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year
2007 and
was estimated
as 9 metric
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tones
.
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Furthermore
discharge of
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Carbon
acidic gas in Sweden was almost 8. 5 metric
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tones
in the
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year
1967, ten years after it was rose to a peak and was
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saw
above 10 metric
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tones
.
Unexpectedly
it was
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declare
to nose dived by the years 1987 and rate as absolute 7 metric
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tones
, the section of CO2 emissions stood at around 6 metric
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tones
for the
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year
1997.
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Finally
by the
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end
of the period they face a sharp dwindle and
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just
rated as 5 metric tones.

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, the output for Italy accounted for
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just
over 4 metric
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tones
, 1977 the
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year
it
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started
to surge and was as top of 6 metric
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tones
as estimated, demonstrated a similar rising pattern by 1987 remain as top of 6 metric
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tones
. 1997 it began to
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change
and
was guessed
as more the 7 metric
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tones
, at the
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end
of the quantities the
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year
2007 it increased
sharply
and
was announced
as
nearly
8 metric
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tones
.
Moreover
, the data for
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Carbon
Dioxide release for Portugal
overall
was 1 metric
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tone
in 1967, 1977 the
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year
the metric
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started
to
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sky rocket
and was approximately 2 metric
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tones
, it
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started
to boost in 1987 and was roughly 3 metric
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tones
. After another 10 years it
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added
2 more metric
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tones
and
was written
as 5 metric
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tones
.
Lastly
, between 1997 and 2007 the
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details
of the outlay was plateau more or less 5 metric
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tones
, they spot balloon effect within the years 1967 to 2007.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows average Carbon Dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, , Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2000.

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