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The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart provides information about the percentage of employment in males and females in Canada, South Korea, and Sweden between 2005 to 2015. Overall experienced male employment percentage is higher than women in both years while in 2015 women employment percentage is raise as compared to 2005. South Korea has the highest male employment percentage approximately 75% in 2005 which is risen in 2015 by approximately 3 %. Canada had the lowest employment percentage in 2005 just 60% which is risen up in 2015 by 10 %. Women employment ratio had the lowest employment in both charts. Canada had approximately 38% in 2005 and it had slightly raised up 58% in 2015. Sweden and South Korea had raised up employment ratio in both years.
The bar chart provides information about the
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in males and females in Canada, South Korea, and Sweden
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Overall
experienced male
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is higher than women in both years while in 2015 women
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is raise as compared to 2005.

South Korea has the highest male
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approximately 75% in 2005 which
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in 2015 by approximately 3 %. Canada had the lowest
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in 2005
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Women
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ratio had the lowest
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in both charts. Canada had approximately 38% in 2005 and it had
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raised up 58% in 2015. Sweden and South Korea had raised up
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ratio in both years.

IELTS academic The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015.

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