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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. wBnM3
The line graph illustrates information about yearly rate of US customers on mobile phones and residential phone services in the years 2001 and 2010. Overall, cell phone services experienced upward trend throughout the period and residential phone services experienced downward trend in th period. In the year 2001 cell phone service annual expenditure was $200 then it rose to $300in the year2002. For some period it was steady and then after that it increased very fastly and reached to approximately $550 in the year 2006. Continuously it was growing and jumped to approximately $750 at the end of the period 2010. However, residential phone services were high in the intial period. It was $700 in the year 2001 and it was decreased over the period in the years 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005 were by $600, $500, $550 reaspectively. Both the services expenditure was same in the year 2006. It was approximately $500. After that residential services dropped continuously until 2010. It was $400 when it decreased to $500. It never rose again.
The line graph illustrates information about yearly rate of US customers on mobile
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phones
and
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residential
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phone
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services
in the years 2001 and 2010.

Overall
, cell
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phone
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services
experienced upward trend throughout the
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period
and
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residential
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phone
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services
experienced downward trend in
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th
period.

In the
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year
2001 cell
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phone
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service
annual expenditure was $200 then it rose to $300in the
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year2002
. For
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some
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period
it was steady and then after that it increased
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very
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fastly
and reached to approximately $550 in the
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year
2006.
Continuously
it was growing and jumped to approximately $750 at the
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end
of the
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period
2010.

However
,
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residential
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phone
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services
were high in the
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intial
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period
. It was $700 in the
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year
2001 and it
was decreased
over the
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period
in the years 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005 were by $600, $500, $550
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reaspectively
. Both the
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services
expenditure was same in the
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year
2006. It was approximately $500.

After that
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residential
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services
dropped
continuously
until 2010. It was $400 when it decreased to $500. It never rose again.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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5 paragraphs
172 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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