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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. do5DK
The line graph illustrates the amount of air pollutants from three different sources in the UK between 1990 and 2005. Overall, the total number of air pollutants decreased over the period shown. While the amount of air pollutants from industry and households witnessed a considerable rise, the figure for transport remained relatively stable. In 1990, the amount of air pollutant from three sources was 7 million tonnes, while the data of emissions from industry, households and transportation were 5. 5 million, 0. 9 million and 0. 9 million tonnes respectively. Over the nine following years, the total amount of pollutants released into air decreased sharply by 3 million tonnes and the same pattern can be seen in the number of harmful gases emitted from transportation. While the amount of air pollutants from households fell from 0. 9 million to about 0. 7 million tonnes, the figure for transport fluctuated slightly between 0. 9 million and 1 million tonnes over the same period. In 2005, the total number of air pollutants decreased gradually to above 3 million tonnes. Similarly, the data on industry and households drop to 2 million and 0. 2 million tonnes. The amount of emissions released into air from transportation stood at 1 million tonnes at the end of the period
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sources in the UK between 1990 and 2005.
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drop to 2
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IELTS academic The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005.

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