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The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. JoqV0
The graph given shows us average annual expenditure on cell phone and residential phone sevices from 2001-2010 and graph is showing that cell phone services increased residential phone services decreased for some period and vice versa for some period. And the services have same average annual expenditure in 2006. As we go deep into details expenditure on cell phone services is 200 USD and on residential phone services is around 700 USD and there is a huge difference between services and it is showing cell phone services expenditure is very lower than residential services in 2001 and as years are passing there is difference of revenue in cell phone expenditure and residential phone expenditure was decreased till 2005 and in 2006 they both have same expenditure on both services and later after difference becomes negative between two services and expenditure on cell phone services increases between 2007 to 2010 where as 2001 to 2005 residential phone sevices were higher than cell phone services. Conclusively, the graph is showing that there is usage of residential phone sevices are higher between 2001-2005 and same in the year 2006 and cell phone services are higher between 2007-2010.
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from 2001-2010 and graph is showing that
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have same average annual
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in 2006.

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is 200 USD and on
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is around 700 USD and there is a huge difference between
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and it is showing
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in 2001 and as years are passing there is difference of revenue in
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2001 to 2005
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services.

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are higher between 2001-2005 and same in the year 2006 and
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are higher between 2007-2010.

IELTS academic The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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194 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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