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The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. 8q0x
The line graph illustrates the information about the money which was spent on mobile phone and landline services by the American consumers in an year over a decade. Overall, the amount of money which was spent on cellphone service increased throughout the period whereas expenditure on residential phone decreased. The most striking feature is the amount of money was same in mid year. It can be seen from the is given chart that in 2001, the expenditure on mobile was $ 200 and it rose by $l00 after two years. The amount of money which was spent on cell phone inclined by $100 in an year and it reached on approx $ 800 till 2010. On the other hands, the annual expenditure on landline was nearly $700 in 2001. After four years only, $550 was spent and it showed decline and came on $400 in final year.
The line graph illustrates the information about the
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on mobile phone and landline services by the American consumers in
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over a decade.

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, the amount of
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money
which was
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spent
on cellphone service increased throughout the period whereas expenditure on residential phone decreased. The most striking feature is the amount of
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money
was same in
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mid year
.

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from the is
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chart that in 2001, the expenditure on mobile was
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$ 200
and it rose by $l00 after two years. The amount of
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money
which was
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spent
on cell phone inclined by $100 in
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an
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year
and it reached on approx
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$ 800
till 2010.

On the other hands, the annual expenditure on landline was
nearly
$700 in 2001. After four years
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, $550 was
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spent
and it
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showed
decline and came on $400 in final
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year
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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