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The maps below show how the town of Harborne changes from 1936 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show how the town of Harborne changes from 1936 to 2007. wD8q
The illustration highlights the changes that occurred in Harborne from a quiet town to a more residential area over a period of 71 years, from 1936 to 2007. A shopping centre was newly built right at the core of the town on the ground where a garden used to be located. There was a rectangular area surrounding the shopping mall which reduced in the number of facilities from 1936 to 2007. Of these particular facilities, three of them remained the same, namely a post office to the west north of the shopping center, a bank to the south, and a library to the right of the bank. The sweet shop and butchers, to the north and the east north of the garden respectively, were demolished to build a supermarket. The flower shop, to the left of the bank, was replaced with a travel agent. Moving outside the rectangular area to the southwest of the town, a museum was constructed exactly on the location where the government offices were situated 71 years ago. To the right of the museum, a golf course was also erected on the initial farm land. The original cycle path in the southwest part of Harborne was straightened and made into a road. The river, to the east north of the town, was filled to make room for a residential area. In the west north region, two of three trees were chopped down.
The illustration highlights the
changes
that occurred in
Harborne
from a quiet
town
to a more residential
area
over a period of 71 years, from 1936 to 2007.

A shopping
centre
was
newly
built right at the core of the
town
on the ground where a garden
used
to
be located
. There was a rectangular
area
surrounding the shopping mall which
reduced
in the number of facilities from 1936 to 2007. Of these particular facilities, three of them remained the same,
namely
a post office to the west
north
of the shopping center, a bank to the south, and a library to the right of the bank. The sweet shop and butchers, to the
north
and the east
north
of the garden
respectively
,
were demolished
to build a supermarket. The flower shop, to the
left
of the bank,
was replaced
with a travel agent. Moving outside the rectangular
area
to the southwest of the
town
, a museum
was constructed
exactly on the location where the
government
offices
were situated
71 years ago. To the right of the museum, a golf course was
also
erected on the initial farm land. The original cycle path in the southwest part of
Harborne
was straightened
and made into a road. The river, to the east
north
of the
town
,
was filled
to
make
room for a residential
area
. In the west
north
region, two of three trees
were chopped
down.
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