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Task 1 Task 2 The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Task 1 Task 2 The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. ODnE
The given chart illustrate the information about men and women who passed in driving licence from 1980 till 2010 in the one particular asain nation. This chart depicts the information in percentage. Overall, between the time period of 1980 to 2010 proportion of women was highest in all years as compared to other gender. It can be clearly seen that, in 1980 the ratio of women was near about 50 percent, which inclined slightly to 52% after the time period of one decade, followed by this figures again increased slowly and reaches all time high of 69% in 2000. Moreover in the next decade it shows a opposite trend and decreased to 65%. Moving further, in the case of women similar proportion can be seen in 2000 and 2010 with 49% each. In 1980 and 1990 percentage of women those passed the driving licence accounted for 29%, 36%.
The
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chart illustrate the information about
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men
and
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women
who passed in driving
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licence
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from 1980 till 2010
in the one particular
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asain
nation. This chart depicts the information in percentage.

Overall
, between the time period of 1980 to 2010 proportion of
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women
was highest in all years as compared to other gender.

It can be
clearly
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seen
that, in 1980 the ratio of
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women
was near about 50 percent, which inclined
slightly
to 52% after the time period of one decade, followed by
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this
figures again increased
slowly
and reaches
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all time
high of 69% in 2000.
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Moreover
in the
next
decade it
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shows
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a
opposite trend and decreased to 65%.

Moving
further
, in the case of
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women
similar proportion can be
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seen
in 2000 and 2010 with 49% each. In 1980 and 1990 percentage of
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women
those passed the driving
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licence
accounted for 29%, 36%.
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IELTS academic Task 1 Task 2 The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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