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In some offices, employees work in enclosed workstations or cubicles. Other offices have a more open design, in which there are no walls separating employees from their coworkers. Which type of arrangement do you think is most effective? Explain, giving reasons to support your answer.

In some offices, employees work in enclosed workstations or cubicles. Other offices have a more open design, in which there are no walls separating employees from their coworkers. Which type of arrangement do you think is most effective? Explain, giving reasons to support your answer. Ee6q
Style of working has changed unprecedently in recent years and continue to take different forms. Companies are evolving and changing their ways of working to keep up with the new trends. Open design offices are being adopted by small and large companies equally. Even though working in closed cubicles have their own benefits, it is still an outdated concept and works against a non-hierarchical work environment. In my view, open design work arrangements are more effective in creating a healthy work environment. Working in open environment without creating individual cubicles saves a lot of space. It ultimately leads to saving of the other resources such as electricity, furniture etc. Open offices can be set up anywhere, do not necessarily needs a dedicated office space. A simple table can act as a working space by putting together computer hardware components and some furniture. Apart from being more economical, such spaces have played role in bringing down hierarchies and subordinate culture. It brings down a red-tapism in companies and a promotes a culture based on equality. Workers enjoy equal rights in such places which acts as great motivation for them to do better in their jobs. It ultimately leads to employees satisfaction which is directly linked to prosperity of a company. A number of studies conducted on reasons behind profitability of specific companies has shown a direct link between such open work arrangements and their financial growth. On the other hand, enclosed workstation have their own particular uses and suitable for some very specific jobs. For instance, a lawyer doing research for his case might better off in working in cubicle rather than sitting in noisy table along with others. In conclusion, open work arrangement works better than closed workstations and gaining a lot of traction among companies.
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unprecedently
in recent years and continue to take
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different
forms.
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Companies
are evolving and changing their ways of
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working
to
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keep
up with the new trends.
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Open
design offices are
being adopted
by
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small
and large
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companies
equally
.
Even though
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working
in closed cubicles have their
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own
benefits, it is
still
an outdated concept and works against a non-hierarchical
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work
environment. In my view,
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open
design
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work
arrangements are more effective in creating a healthy
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work
environment.

Working in
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open
environment without creating individual cubicles saves
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a lot of
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space
. It
ultimately
leads to saving of the other resources such as electricity, furniture etc.
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Open
offices can
be set
up anywhere, do not
necessarily
needs a dedicated office
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space
. A simple table can act as a
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working
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space
by putting together computer hardware components and
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some
furniture. Apart from being more economical, such
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spaces
have played role in bringing down hierarchies and subordinate culture. It brings down a
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red-tapism
in
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companies
and a promotes a culture based on equality. Workers enjoy equal rights in such places which acts as great motivation for them to do better in their jobs. It
ultimately
leads to employees satisfaction which is
directly
linked to prosperity of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
. A number of studies conducted on reasons behind profitability of specific
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
companies
has shown a direct link between such
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
open
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work
arrangements and their financial growth.

On the other hand
, enclosed workstation have their
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own
particular
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uses
and suitable for
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some
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very
specific jobs.
For instance
, a lawyer doing research for his case might better off in
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working
in cubicle
rather
than sitting in noisy table along with others.

In conclusion
,
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open
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work
arrangement works better than closed workstations and gaining
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a lot of
traction among
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companies
.

IELTS academic In some offices, employees work in enclosed workstations or cubicles. Other offices have a more open design, in which there are no walls separating employees from their coworkers. Which type of arrangement do you think is most effective? Explain, giving reasons to support your answer.

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