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Free time activities of the elderly in the united states from 1980 to presents .summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevant

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The provided line graph gives information about free time activities of the elderly in the United State in the period of 20 years from 1980 to 2010. In general, reading, hiking, watching TV and surfing the internet experienced an upward trend while the theater shows a downward trend. As the given chart, there was a dramatic rise with no fluctuation in hiking from 20% in 1980s to over 80% in 2010s. Both watching TV and surfing the internet increased gradually between 1980s and 2000s, however, surfing the internet started to increase sharply from 15% in 2000s to over 50% in 2010s contrasted with the fall of watching TV in this period. From 1980 to 1990, in comparison with going to the theater, which underwent a significant decrease by 20%, the percentage of reading rose gradually. In 1990s, going to the theater increased back again peaking at over 45% in 2010s while reading suddenly fell to 20% in 2000s before reaching 60% in 2010s.
The provided line graph gives information about free time activities of the elderly in the United State in the period of 20 years from 1980 to 2010.

In general
, reading, hiking, watching TV and surfing the internet experienced an upward trend while the theater
shows
a downward trend.

As the
given
chart, there was a dramatic rise with no fluctuation in hiking from 20%
in 1980s
to over 80%
in 2010s
. Both watching TV and surfing the internet increased
gradually
between 1980s and 2000s,
however
, surfing the internet
started
to increase
sharply
from 15%
in 2000s
to over 50%
in 2010s
contrasted with the fall of watching TV in this period.

From 1980 to 1990,
in comparison
with going to the theater, which underwent a significant decrease by 20%, the percentage of reading rose
gradually
.
In 1990s
, going to the theater increased back again peaking at over 45%
in 2010s
while reading
suddenly
fell to 20%
in 2000s
before
reaching 60%
in 2010s
.
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IELTS academic Free time activities of the elderly in the united states from 1980 to presents.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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