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The table details the registration of five different kinds of vehicles in Australia changed in three years, 2010, 2012 and 2014

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The table details the registration of five different kinds of vehicles in Australia changed in three years, 2010, 2012 and 2014. Overall, the number of vehicles in all the five categories enjoyed steady upward trends, with the figures for motorcycles and light trucks undergoing the most significant upswing. It is also clear that passenger vehicles are the most prevalent mode of transportation among the five types surveyed. In 2010, there were 11. 8 million passenger vehicles registered. Becam the most common type of vehicles, and this number was nearly 5 times higher than that of commercial vehicles, at 2. 3 million. In the next 4 years, the number of passenger vehicles and commercial vehicles grew to 13 million and 2. 7 million. Althoug albeit a little bit less pronounced. Both passenger vehicles and commercial vehicles made up a large number of types of vehicles. The 3 remaining types of vehicles were considerably less common. The respective starting points for each were 540, 000 motorcycles, 384, 000 heavy trucks and 106, 000 light trucks. Motorcycles rose the most rapidly, with a more than 30% increase to 709, 000 by the end of the period. Heavy trucks made marginal gains totaling 8. 3%, which amounted to 416, 00 registrations in 2014. Finally, 124, 000 new light trucks were registered in 2012 and an additional 131, 000 in 2014 translating to a 23. 5% increase.
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the registration of five
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different
kinds of
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in Australia
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in three years, 2010, 2012 and 2014.
Overall
, the
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number
of
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vehicles
in all the five categories enjoyed steady upward trends, with the figures for motorcycles and light
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trucks
undergoing the most significant upswing. It is
also
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that
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passenger
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vehicles
are the most prevalent mode of transportation among the five
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types
surveyed.

In 2010, there were 11. 8
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passenger
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vehicles
registered.
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of
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vehicles
, and this
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was
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, at 2. 3
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passenger
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and commercial
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grew to 13
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and 2. 7
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and commercial
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made up a large
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of vehicles.

The 3 remaining
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were
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less common. The respective starting points for each were 540, 000 motorcycles, 384, 000 heavy
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trucks
and 106, 000 light
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trucks
. Motorcycles rose the most
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, with a more than 30% increase to 709, 000 by the
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of the period. Heavy
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made marginal gains totaling 8. 3%, which amounted to 416, 00 registrations in 2014.
Finally
, 124, 000 new light
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were registered
in 2012 and an additional 131, 000 in 2014 translating to a 23. 5% increase.
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IELTS academic The table details the registration of five different kinds of vehicles in Australia changed in three years, 2010, 2012 and 2014

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