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The diagram neatly demonstrates how for construction industry. Overall, the procedure involves ~about~ seven well demonstrated steps from excavation of clay soil to the last point where they become blocks which are loaded to track for delivery. Firstly, the process is initiated by digging and the soil put in metal grid for rolling, mixture water and sand are then added after which its either broken into pieces using wire cutter or molded into required shape. Thereafter, the moulded and cut bricks are dried in an oven for about one to two days. After which, they are placed under moderate temperature between 200-980 degrees Celsius for sometime then high temperatures raised to maximum of degrees Celsius in the first and second kiln chambers. In the following stage, they are left for nearly 48 to 72hrs they are left in cooling chamber. Lastly, ready bricks are packaged and delivery awaiting.
The diagram
neatly
demonstrates how for construction industry.

Overall
, the procedure involves
~about~
seven well demonstrated steps from excavation of clay soil to the last point where they become blocks which
are loaded
to
track
for delivery.

Firstly
, the process
is initiated
by digging and the soil put in metal grid for rolling, mixture water and sand are then
added
after which its either broken into pieces using wire cutter or molded into required shape.

Thereafter, the
moulded
and
cut
bricks
are dried
in an oven for about one to two days. After which, they
are placed
under moderate temperature between 200-980 degrees Celsius for sometime then high temperatures raised to maximum of degrees Celsius in the
first
and second kiln chambers. In the following stage, they are
left
for
nearly
48 to 72hrs they are
left
in cooling chamber.

Lastly
, ready bricks
are packaged
and delivery awaiting.
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IELTS academic bricks are packaged and delivery awaiting.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
148 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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