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Leisure time in a typical week

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The bar graph describes the amount of leisure time various categories of men and women have depending on their work status. Overall, there are no statistics presented for males in the two of the five categories described and of the other three, men have more leisure time than women. Of all the respective categories, unemployed and retired men and women have the most time off, with males over 80%, approximately 5% more than women in these two categories. In the only other category where there is a differentiation by gender, again, men in full time work have more leisure time than women with roughly 50% as opposed to under 40% for their female counterparts. The other two categories on the graph describe only female leisure time so that a comparison by gender is not possible. Housewives have 50% leisure time and part time employed women have 10% less free time.
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the amount of
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various
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of
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men
and
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have depending on their work status.

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categories
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and of the other three,
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men
have more
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leisure
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time
than women.

Of all the respective
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categories
, unemployed and retired
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men
and
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women
have the most
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time
off, with males over 80%, approximately 5% more than
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women
in these two
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categories
. In the
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only
other
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category
where there is a differentiation by gender, again,
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men
in full
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work have more
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leisure
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time
than
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women
with roughly 50% as opposed to under 40% for their female counterparts.

The other two
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categories
on the graph
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describe
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female
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that a comparison by gender is not possible. Housewives have 50%
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leisure
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time
and part
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employed
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women
have 10% less free
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time
.
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IELTS academic Leisure time in a typical week

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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