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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph ilustrates the quantities of goods transported in the United Kingdom by Rour different modes of transport between the time period of 1974 and 2002. Over this span of 28 years, the quantities of goods Fransported by road, water and pipeline have all increased while the quantity transported by rail has remained almost constant at about 10 million tonnes. The largest quantity of goods transported both in 1974 and 2002 war by road (70 million tonnes and 98 million tonnes respective while the lowest bard in 1974 and 2002 was by pipeline (about 5 millio ronnes and million tonnes respectively). The amount of good's transported by Wieter wasi constant from 1974 to 1978, where showed an exponeria granth, rising to almost 60 million tonnes after which it plateaued for about 20 years before starting to rise gradually again The amount of goods transported by rail is almost constant at 40 million Fonnes in 1974 and 2002, with decreases in quantity in between the years. It is also interesting to note that almost all showed a decrease in 1994 in amount of goods transported except for the pipeline, which actually peaked in that year. In conclusion the red remains the most popular method of transporting goods in the UK while water and pipelines are becoming increasingly used, harc not become more popular as a method of transport.
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transported in the United Kingdom by
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different
modes of transport between the time period of 1974 and 2002. Over this span of 28 years, the
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quantities
of
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goods
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Fransported
by road, water and pipeline have all increased while the
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quantity
transported by rail has remained
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almost
constant at about 10
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million
tonnes.

The largest
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goods
transported both in 1974 and 2002 war by road
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70
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million
tonnes and 98
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tonnes respective while the lowest bard in 1974 and 2002 was by pipeline (about 5
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millio
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ronnes
and
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million
tonnes
respectively
). The amount of
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's transported by
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Wieter
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constant from 1974 to 1978, where
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an
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exponeria
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, rising to
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60
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tonnes after which it plateaued for about 20 years
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before
starting to rise
gradually
again

The amount of
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transported by rail is
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constant at 40
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million
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Fonnes
in 1974 and 2002, with decreases in
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in between the years. It is
also
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showed
a decrease in 1994 in amount of
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transported
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except for
the pipeline, which actually peaked in that year.

In conclusion
the red remains the most popular method of transporting
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goods
in the UK while water and pipelines are becoming
increasingly
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used
,
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not become more popular as a method of transport.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

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