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the graph below shows the quantities of goods exported from Russia to several countries between 1975 to 2010 by different modes of transport.

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The line chart depicts the information about the quantities of goods in million tonnes exported from Russia to other countries by several modes of transportation in 35 years from 1975 to 2010. It can be seen from the chart that a large number of goods are transported through water transportation. Around 90 million tonnes of goods were exported through it in 1975. However, it consistently increases during 35 years of span and ends at 130 million tonnes of in 2010. The other mode of transportation which is preferred is roadways. In 1975 around 60 million tonnes of goods were exported from roadways and the value increased to 82 million tonnes in 2010. In railways 1975 around 52 million tonnes of goods which reached at 30 million tonnes in 1995 and then increased gradually and reached at 58 million tonnes in 2010. The least quantity exported by the mode of transportation is airways. In 1975 around 8 million tonnes moved by airways and increases till 40 million tonnes. Finally, it can be seen that all modes of transportation have a significant increase in the number of goods being transported.
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IELTS academic the graph below shows the quantities of goods exported from Russia to several countries between 1975 to 2010 by different modes of transport.

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