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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. qyra
The line graph depicts the population percentage among elderly people aged over 65 for the three various countries from year 1940 to 2040. The data is calibrated in percentage. Overall, the proportion of aged 65 and over people increased over the 80 year period and it is predicted to continuously rise in year 2040. In 1940, people aged 65 and above in USA has an almost 10% of population while Sweden is approximately 2% lower than this. However, Japan exactly has a 5% population with this age group. In addition, percentage population for aged 65 and over in USA and Sweden significantly rised in year 1980 at 15% and 14% respectively, In contrast, Japan's population suddenly dropped at 3% in the same year. Furthermore, in 2020, Sweden's elderly people aged over 65 rose at around 18% whilst those from USA has an estimated 12%. Surprisingly, this age group in Japan dramatically rose to 25% and will continue to rise in 2040,
The line graph depicts the
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population
percentage among elderly
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people
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aged
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over
65 for the three various countries from
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year
1940 to 2040. The data
is calibrated
in percentage.

Overall
, the proportion of
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aged
65 and
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over
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people
increased
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over
the 80
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year
period and it
is predicted
to
continuously
rise in
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year
2040.

In 1940,
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people
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aged
65 and above
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in USA
has an almost 10% of
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population
while Sweden is approximately 2% lower than this.
However
, Japan exactly has a 5%
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population
with this age group.
In addition
, percentage
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population
for
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aged
65 and
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over
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in USA
and Sweden
significantly
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rised
in
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year
1980 at 15% and 14%
respectively
,
In contrast
, Japan's
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population
suddenly
dropped at 3% in the same year.

Furthermore
, in 2020, Sweden's elderly
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people
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aged
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over
65 rose at around 18% whilst those
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from USA
has an estimated 12%.
Surprisingly
, this age group in Japan
dramatically
rose to 25% and will continue to rise in 2040,

IELTS academic The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

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