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the diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured .

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Some interesting data concerning instant noodles production, are revealed in the graph below. The most significant fact is that the whole process, from the storage to the finished product, is completed in 8 steps, among which one regard the flour transportation, four the noodles preparation, only one the cooking process and two the cups packaging. Moving to a more detailed analysis, the flour, that is stored into silos, is then moved to the facory where, after being mixed with water and oil, is shaped in dough sheets and it undergoes to rollers processing. After this first steps, the dough is cut into strips that are lately grouped in noodles discs. It begins at this point the cooking process, for which is used oil, and that is later followed by the drying step. Finally, the cooked noodles are placed in cups and, before having the cups labelled and sealed, vegetables and spices are added.

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noodles
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noodles
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