Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The graph below shows the population of Sea Bay and dolphin and gormez straits from 2006 to 2018

The graph below shows the population of Sea Bay and dolphin and gormez straits from 2006 to 2018 8gbJV

The assigned data illustrate the ratio of three water animals in Gomez straits Which was depicted in the form of Bar chart between 2006 and 2018. In general, it can be inferred that the dolphins showed an upward trend, while the others revealed the significant change throughout the period. Taking the statistical data into consideration, it can be analyzed that in the year 2006, sails, it accounted for almost 45% whereas the Whales and Dolphins were almost a quarter and 1/5, respectively. Meanwhile, the whales showed the highest proportion than other categories. The whales and sails stood at approximately 25 percent as against to dolphins were just above (20%) in 2010. Probing further, scrutinizing the given data further the percentage of dolphins in 2014 was almost one thrid but in the year 2018 it was reached to around 55 percent. In contrast, in 2014 and 2018, in terms of sails, a static data has been noticed over the period. As regards seals, it started escalating considerably till 2018.

The assigned You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturestatisticsknowledgedossierevidencegoods
data
 illustrate the ratio of three water animals in Gomez straits Which was depicted
 in the form of Bar chart between 2006 and 2018.

In general
, it can be inferred
 that the dolphins This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 an upward trend, while the others revealed the significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 throughout the period.

Taking the statistical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturestatisticsknowledgedossierevidencegoods
data
 into consideration, it can be analyzed
 that in the year 2006, sails, it accounted for almost 45% whereas the Whales and Dolphins were almost a quarter and 1/5, respectively
. Meanwhile, the whales This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 the highest proportion than other categories. The whales and sails stood at approximately 25 percent as against to dolphins were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 above (20%) in 2010.

Probing further
, scrutinizing the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturestatisticsknowledgedossierevidencegoods
data
further
 the percentage of dolphins in 2014 was almost one Possible spelling mistake found.third
thrid
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in the year 2018 it was reached
 to around 55 percent. In contrast
, in 2014 and 2018, in terms of sails, a static You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturestatisticsknowledgedossierevidencegoods
data
 has been noticed
 over the period. As regards seals, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 escalating considerably
 till 2018. 