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The maps demonstrate the arrangement of an island, before and after the appearance of infrastructure catering to the service industry associated with visiting this island.

The maps demonstrate the arrangement of an island, before and after the appearance of infrastructure catering to the service industry associated with visiting this island. Baxdp
The maps demonstrate the arrangement of an island, before and after the appearance of infrastructure catering to the service industry associated with visiting this island. Overall, It is noticeable that although the island area does not transform, the distribution of facilities inside the island has changed. Firstly, In the previous time, the island area was unoccupied and that is why there were only a few jungles in the area of the middle east and middle west and a beach on the western coast. The total length of this island was approximately 250 meters. After the development of facilities distribution, The island has extreme changes. Visitors set their first step on the island through a pier located in the southern area. Go strange from the pier, visitors can encounter a reception area located in the center of the island which is circled by a vehicle track. Visitors will have a restaurant with a seaside view if they move with the same distance from the pier to the reception but the north. The western and eastern areas of the reception have some accommodation with footpaths connecting to help tourists easily to go around. Specially, visitors can swim in the area developed from the original beach before.
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and after the appearance of infrastructure catering to the service industry associated with visiting this island.

Overall
, It is noticeable that although the
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island
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area
does not transform, the distribution of facilities inside the
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island
has
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changed
.

Firstly
, In the previous time, the
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island
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area
was unoccupied
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why there were
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only
a few jungles in the
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area
of the
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middle east
and middle west and a beach on the western coast. The total length of this
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island
was approximately 250 meters.

After the development of facilities distribution, The
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island
has extreme
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changes
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Visitors
set their
first
step on the
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island
through a pier located in the southern
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area
. Go strange from the pier,
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visitors
can encounter a reception
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area
located in the center of the
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island
which
is circled
by a vehicle
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track
.
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Visitors
will have a restaurant with a seaside view if they
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move
with the same distance from the pier to the reception
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the north. The western and eastern
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areas
of the reception have
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some
accommodation with footpaths connecting to
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help
tourists
easily
to go around.
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,
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visitors
can swim in the
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area
developed from the original beach
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before
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IELTS academic The maps demonstrate the arrangement of an island, before and after the appearance of infrastructure catering to the service industry associated with visiting this island.

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