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The maps below show the layout of James Park in 2017 and the proposed changes to the park in 2027

The maps below show the layout of James Park in 2017 and the proposed changes to the park in 2027 KGPdM

The given plan shows the Original plan of James Park in 2017 and the proposed renovation of the park in 2027. As per the original plan, it is observed that the monthly visitors to the garden are about 5000 in numbers. Whereas, after the renovations being made in 2027, the counts are presumed to be about 20, 000 user per month. The science center, at the top left end, in 2007, is expanded to its complete stretch. The fountain at the top left is removed, and its replaced by a garden. Foot paths are to be sprawled completely throughout the park for pedestrians and ease of reach. The main playground is to be stretched ad bifurcated into playground and gymnasium by 2027. The toddler playground is to be replaced by the theater. Position of the statute remains unchanged and sits at the center of the park. In addition of new features, planners anticipate for a rise in visitors.

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 the Original plan of James Park in 2017 and the proposed renovation of the park in 2027.

As per the original plan, it is observed
 that the monthly visitors to the garden are about 5000 in numbers. Whereas, after the renovations being made
 in 2027, the counts are presumed
 to be about 20, 000 user per month.

The science center, at the top This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, in 2007, is expanded
 to its complete stretch. The fountain at the top This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
is removed
, and its replaced by a garden. Foot paths are to be sprawled
 completely throughout the park for pedestrians and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
ease
 of reach. The main playground is to be stretched
 ad bifurcated into playground and gymnasium by 2027. The toddler playground is to be replaced
 by the theater. Position of the statute remains unchanged and sits at the center of the park.

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addition
 of new features, planners anticipate for a rise in visitors. 