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The graph below shows the percentage of young people at universities in the given six countries in the year 2000 and 2007.

The graph below shows the percentage of young people at universities in the given six countries in the year 2000 and 2007. EwlRq
The bar graph shows the propprtion of young people who studied at universities in the year 2000and 2007. At a glance, it is observed that the striking factor being the trend of overall discrepancies in the proportion of young people at the universities. In the year, 2000, 38% of youngsters were at the university of italy which increased by the year 2007 with 52%. At the university of Spain and Uk, youngers were sharing same platform with 46% in the year 2000 respectively. 41% of young ones at university of Spain which were 54% in the UK in the yeae 2007. There were neglidgible difference in the percentsge of students in both years whereas finland sharing same platform with 70% in both years. Finally, it can be derived that the highest proportion of students studied at university of poland whereas in italy the least number of students studied.
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propprtion
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people
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universities
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year
2000and 2007.

At a glance, it
is observed
that the striking factor being the trend of
overall
discrepancies in the proportion of young
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people
at the
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universities
. In the
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year
, 2000, 38% of youngsters were at the
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university
of
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italy
which increased by the
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year
2007 with 52%. At the
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university
of Spain and
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Uk
,
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youngers
were sharing same platform with 46% in the
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year
2000
respectively
. 41% of young ones at
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university
of Spain which were 54% in the UK in the
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yeae
2007. There were
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neglidgible
difference in the
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percentsge
of students in both years whereas
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finland
sharing same platform with 70% in both years.

Finally
, it can
be derived
that the highest proportion of students studied at
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university
of
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poland
whereas in
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italy
the least number of students studied.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the percentage of young people at universities in the given six countries in the year 2000 and 2007.

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