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recruitment of teacher in Ontario between 2001 and 2007

recruitment of teacher in Ontario between 2001 and 2007 LbBxp
The graph yield intelligence about the percentage employ of newcomer instructor for english and french languages in Ontario for customary instruct occupation based on year of graduation during 7 year period from 2001 to 2007 overall at first in 2001 both category of instructor has the same luck for employment on the contrary overtime the percentage of the english instructor has considerably decline while the percentage of french instructor dont have any noticeable changes also between 2003 to 2005 both category of instructor has hardly growth In 2001 english and french language instructor employment was about 70 percent more over english language instructor has considerable drop amidst 2001 to 2003 (70% to 40%) and 2005 to 2007 (45% to 25%) also english language instructor has hardly growth in the middle of 2003 to 2005 (40% to 45%) while french language teacher has hopeless start they had fall among 2001 to 2002 (70% to 55%) also amidst 2002 to 2003 (55% to 70%) they had a normal development in addition among 2003 to 2007 the percentage french language teacher has level-off
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employ of newcomer
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for
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and
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in Ontario for customary instruct occupation based on year of graduation during
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7 year
period from 2001 to 2007

overall
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first
in 2001 both category of
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has the same luck for employment
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overtime the
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percentage
of the
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instructor
has
considerably
decline while the
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of french
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instructor
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dont
have any noticeable
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between 2003 to 2005
both category of
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has hardly growth

In 2001
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and
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french
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language
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employment was about 70 percent more over
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language
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instructor
has considerable drop amidst 2001 to 2003 (70% to 40%) and 2005 to 2007 (45% to 25%)
also
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english
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language
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instructor
has hardly growth in the middle of 2003 to 2005 (40% to 45%) while
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french
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teacher has hopeless
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they had fall among 2001 to 2002 (70% to 55%)
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among 2003 to 2007 the
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percentage
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teacher has level-off
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IELTS academic recruitment of teacher in Ontario between 2001 and 2007

Academic
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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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