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The graph below shows the percentage of dependents in 2000 and the predicted figures in 2050 in five countries , and also gives the world average . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main figures and make comparison where relevant .

The graph below shows the percentage of dependents in 2000 and the predicted figures in 2050 in five countries, and also gives the world average. A1L1
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of the reliables in 2000 and prediction for 2050 in five different countries and the world average. Overall, the percentage of dependents in all countries and world were predicted to rise except India. The major discrepancy observed in Korean population. In 2000, the total percentage of dependents in India was 25 %. 38 % of dependents lived in India. In Indonesia, China, and Japan accounted average at 35%. Korean dependents comprised at just above a fifth. In 2050, population of dependents were expected to grow in all parts except India. World population is predicted to increase at 42 %. Likewise, a minimal increase is forecasted to surge in Indonesia and China about 2-3%, while a major difference is expected to improve in Korean by around 11 % from 22 % to 44 %. Approximately 15 % of dependents was predicted to uplift in japan. In contrast, India was the only country where dependents were expected to decline at 32 % from 38 %.
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to rise except India. The major discrepancy observed in Korean population. In 2000, the total percentage of dependents in India was 25 %. 38 % of dependents
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in India. In Indonesia, China, and Japan accounted average at 35%. Korean dependents comprised at
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above a fifth. In 2050, population of dependents were
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to grow in all parts except India. World population
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in Korean by around 11 % from 22 % to 44 %. Approximately 15 % of dependents
was predicted
to uplift in japan.
In contrast
, India was the
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country where dependents were
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to decline at 32 % from 38 %.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the percentage of dependents in 2000 and the predicted figures in 2050 in five countries, and also gives the world average.

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