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The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010.

The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010. P0OX
The bar chart given illustrates data about how much coffee was produced in different nations in four separate years 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2010. As can be seen from the chart, it is immediately clear that while the amount of coffee produced in Brazil, Indonesia and Vietnam increased, that in Colombia witnessed a downward trend. Another key feature is that the quantity of coffee produced in Brazil in 2010 registered the highest figure of the chart. In 1990, coffee production in Brazil registered north of 0, 7 million tonnes, after which this figure rose dramatically to around 1, 9 million tonnes in 2010. A similar upward trend was experienced in the amount of coffee produced in Indonesia and Vietnam, there was a slight increase from 0, 2 and 0, 15 million tonnes to exactly 0, 4 and 0, 3 million, respectively. In the first year examined, an opposite downward trend was witnessed in the quantity of coffee made in Colombia, this rate decreased minimally from exactly 0, 6 tonnes to 0, 3 tonnes in 2010.
The bar chart
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illustrates data about how much
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coffee
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produced
in
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nations in four separate years 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2010.

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seen
from the chart, it is immediately
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clear
that while the amount of
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coffee
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produced
in Brazil, Indonesia and Vietnam increased, that in Colombia witnessed a downward trend. Another key feature is that the quantity of
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coffee
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produced
in Brazil in 2010 registered the highest figure of the chart.

In 1990,
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coffee
production in Brazil registered north of 0, 7
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million
tonnes, after which this figure rose
dramatically
to around 1, 9
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million
tonnes in 2010. A similar upward trend
was experienced
in the amount of
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coffee
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produced
in Indonesia and Vietnam, there was a slight increase from 0, 2 and 0, 15
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million
tonnes to exactly 0, 4 and 0, 3
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million
,
respectively
.

In the
first
year examined, an opposite downward trend
was witnessed
in the quantity of
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coffee
made in Colombia, this rate decreased
minimally
from exactly 0, 6 tonnes to 0, 3 tonnes in 2010.
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IELTS academic The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010.

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