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The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. EWBL
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of scholars from Brington university starting their career in various employement sectors in the year 2019. Overall, the service industries sectors occupies a major portion while sport and charity has extremely low level of employement opportunities in the given time period. To begin with, service and manufacturing industries were about 33. 0% and 16. 3% respectively. On the other hand, politics and education categories had less than 15% approximately. Alongside, a sector like transportation and warehousing is 7. 8% which is 5% less in science and technology. It is worth notice that, civil service category held 5. 6% opportunities and others were only 2. 8%. Finally, charity and sport possess under 1% which is 0. 3% and 0. 1% individually.
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of scholars from
Brington
university starting their career in various
employement
sectors in the year 2019.
Overall
, the service industries sectors occupies a major portion while sport and charity has
extremely
low level of
employement
opportunities in the
given
time period. To
begin
with, service and manufacturing industries were about 33. 0% and 16. 3%
respectively
.
On the other hand
, politics and education categories had less than 15% approximately. Alongside, a sector like transportation and warehousing is 7. 8% which is 5% less in science and technology. It is worth notice that, civil service category held 5. 6% opportunities
and others
were
only
2. 8%.
Finally
, charity and sport possess under 1% which is 0. 3% and 0. 1%
individually
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors.

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