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the graph below shows the numbers of people moving into and out of the UK between 1993 and 2002. Summarise the imformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevents

the graph below shows the numbers of people moving into and out of the UK between 1993 and 2002. Summarise the imformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevents rGLOn

The graph illustrates how many people immigrated in and emigrated out of the United Kingdom from 1993 to 2002. Overall, there was an upward trend in the number of people moving into the UK meanwhile those leaving the UK rose steadily and unevenly throughout the period. At the beginning, there were 210 000 immigrants in the UK. After growing to 310 000 people in one year later, this figure stayed constant until 1955 and increased minimally by 10 000 people in 1997. However, right after that time, the number of people moving into the UK soared substantially by 170 000 people in 2000 and stabilized at 490 000 people until 2001. In 2002, it reached a peak of 510 000 people. In contrary, the figure of emigrants decreased by 30 000 people in 1994 and remained stable at 240 000 people between 1994 and 1995 before climbing moderately to 280 000 people in 1997. The number of people leaving the UK decline gradually to 260 000 in 1998 and followed by a sharp rise to 310 000 people in 2000. Then it dropped slightly by 5 000 people in 2001. At the end of the period, there were 360 000 emigrants in the UK.

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people
 immigrated in and emigrated out of the United Kingdom from 1993 to 2002.

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, there was an upward trend in the number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 moving into the UK meanwhile those leaving the UK rose steadily
 and unevenly
 throughout the period.

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people
 in one year later, this figure stayed constant until 1955 and increased minimally
 by 10 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in 1997. However
, right after that time, the number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 moving into the UK soared substantially
 by 170 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in 2000 and stabilized at 490 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 until 2001. In 2002, it reached a peak of 510 000 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
.

In contrary, the figure of emigrants decreased by 30 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in 1994 and remained stable at 240 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 between 1994 and 1995 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 climbing moderately
 to 280 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in 1997. The number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 leaving the UK decline gradually
 to 260 000 in 1998 and followed by a sharp rise to 310 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in 2000. Then it dropped slightly
 by 5 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in 2001. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period, there were 360 000 emigrants in the UK. 