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the graph below shows the numbers of people moving into and out of the UK between 1993 and 2002. Summarise the imformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevents

the graph below shows the numbers of people moving into and out of the UK between 1993 and 2002. Summarise the imformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevents rGLOn
The graph illustrates how many people immigrated in and emigrated out of the United Kingdom from 1993 to 2002. Overall, there was an upward trend in the number of people moving into the UK meanwhile those leaving the UK rose steadily and unevenly throughout the period. At the beginning, there were 210 000 immigrants in the UK. After growing to 310 000 people in one year later, this figure stayed constant until 1955 and increased minimally by 10 000 people in 1997. However, right after that time, the number of people moving into the UK soared substantially by 170 000 people in 2000 and stabilized at 490 000 people until 2001. In 2002, it reached a peak of 510 000 people. In contrary, the figure of emigrants decreased by 30 000 people in 1994 and remained stable at 240 000 people between 1994 and 1995 before climbing moderately to 280 000 people in 1997. The number of people leaving the UK decline gradually to 260 000 in 1998 and followed by a sharp rise to 310 000 people in 2000. Then it dropped slightly by 5 000 people in 2001. At the end of the period, there were 360 000 emigrants in the UK.
The graph illustrates how
many
people
immigrated in and emigrated out of the United Kingdom from 1993 to 2002.

Overall
, there was an upward trend in the number of
people
moving into the UK meanwhile those leaving the UK rose
steadily
and
unevenly
throughout the period.

At the beginning, there were 210 000 immigrants in the UK. After growing to 310 000
people
in one year later, this figure stayed constant until 1955 and increased
minimally
by 10 000
people
in 1997.
However
, right after that time, the number of
people
moving into the UK soared
substantially
by 170 000
people
in 2000 and stabilized at 490 000
people
until 2001. In 2002, it reached a peak of 510 000
people
.

In contrary, the figure of emigrants decreased by 30 000
people
in 1994 and remained stable at 240 000
people
between 1994 and 1995
before
climbing
moderately
to 280 000
people
in 1997. The number of
people
leaving the UK decline
gradually
to 260 000 in 1998 and followed by a sharp rise to 310 000
people
in 2000. Then it dropped
slightly
by 5 000
people
in 2001. At the
end
of the period, there were 360 000 emigrants in the UK.
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IELTS academic the graph below shows the numbers of people moving into and out of the UK between 1993 and 2002. Summarise the imformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevents

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