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The chart below gives information about the amount of time children spend with their parents. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below gives information about the amount of time children spend with their parents. Kln7R
The two bar charts compare the time children spend on with their parents on weekdays and weekends. It is clear from the chart that children at the age 0 to 9 spend more time with their mom than their dad on weekdays. Meanwhile, they had a tendency to spend most of their time on weekends to both mom and dad. On weekends, the amount of time children spend with their mom is the most, about 6, 2-7, 8 hours a day at the age under nine, and yet they only spend no more 2 hours with their dad. Moreover, the time that children spend with both dad and mom is fluctuate between 8, 2 to approximately 10 hours a day. On weekends, the children spend most of their time with both dad and mom, about 8, 5-10, 2 hours a day, especially the age 4-5, they spend over 10 hours with theirs parents, more than 5 times they spend with their dad and roughly 3 times than they spend with their mom. However, the amount of time children spend with their mom on weekends is drop gradually than on the weekdays. By contrast, the time that children spend with their dad on weekdays and weekends is almost remain stable at the age 4-5 but it have a little decrease at the other age.
The two bar charts compare the
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0 to 9
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with their
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than their
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on weekdays. Meanwhile, they had a tendency to
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most of their
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weekends
to both
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, the amount of
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time
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children
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spend
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is the most, about 6, 2-7, 8
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no more 2
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4-5, they
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