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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

he line graph illustrates how many male and female Canadian students have graduated from university between 1992 and 2007. Overall, it can be seen clearly that the number of graduates from both genders have increased by the end of the period. However, women graduates outnumbered men over the given period. To begin with, in 1992, there were less than a hundred thousand female bachelor graduate. This figure rose slightly in 1995 by nearly 5000 women before dropping again to 100, 000 in the following year. However, in 2000, the figure jumped dramatically from just 100, 000 female students to peak at just under 150, 000. On the other hand, the number of men graduating from university was less by nearly 30, 000 students compared to women. The figure kept fluctuating between 1992 and 2000; however, it have increased dramatically from just over 70, 000 male graduates in 2001 to approximately 95, 000 by 2007.

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 graph illustrates how This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
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 male and female Canadian students have graduated from university between 1992 and 2007.

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 that the number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrecipientdoctorgradalumalumnus
graduates
 from both genders have increased by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
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 of the period. However
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 outnumbered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 over the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period.

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begin
 with, in 1992, there were less than a hundred thousand female bachelor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrecipientdoctorgradalumalumnus
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. This figure rose slightly
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 100, 000 female students to peak at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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 under 150, 000.

On the other hand
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men
 graduating from university was less by nearly
 30, 000 students compared to women. The figure This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
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 fluctuating between 1992 and 2000; however
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 over 70, 000 male You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrecipientdoctorgradalumalumnus
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 in 2001 to approximately 95, 000 by 2007. 