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The graph illustrates the changes in the tourist number who visited the Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. Ther are mainly two staying type of visitors. The first type is staying on cruise ships and the other one is visitors staying on the island. The tourist number who choose to stay in cruise ships has doubled in three years from 2010. There is a constant increase in the numbers by the years of change. Except in 2015 to 2016 the number stays the same. However, in the next year the number jump over one million. The tourists who stay on the island has mostly stable numbers over time. In 2011 to 2013, there is a significant increase, but the visitor number stays calm over the next three year. The tolar number, stay over less than one million to a half million between 2010 to 2014. Also, from 2014 to 2017 there is a stable increase. Finally, the number reaches two million in the year of 2017.
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who visited the Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.
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two staying type of visitors. The
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type is staying on cruise ships and the other one is visitors staying on the island.

The tourist
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who choose to
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in cruise ships has doubled in three years from 2010. There is a constant increase in the
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by the years of
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the
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on the island has
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time. In 2011 to 2013, there is a significant increase,
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the visitor
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three year.

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,
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less than one million to a half million
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between 2010 to 2014
.
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reaches two million in the
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of 2017.
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