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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line chart illustrates the number of people graduated from university by gender in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Overall, there was an increasing trend in figure of graduated students. In addition, the data of female was always higher than that of men. In 1992, the number of university graduates was 70, 000 for women and nearly 100, 000 for men. Despite some fluctuation, the figure of male graduates rose sharply from 1997 to 2002 and reach the peak at nearly 150, 000 in 2002. Additionally, the figure of female graduates increased significantly to 75, 000 in 1995, then slightly dropped to about 72, 000 in 2001. The number of female students graduated from university significantly from 2001 to 2007, with 80, 000 and 90, 000 in 2003 and 2006, respectively.
The line chart illustrates the number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
graduated from university by gender in Canada from 1992 to 2007.
Overall
, there was an increasing trend in figure of graduated students.
In addition
, the data of female was always higher than that of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
men
.

In 1992, the number of university graduates was 70, 000 for women and
nearly
100, 000 for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
men
. Despite
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some
fluctuation, the figure of male graduates rose
sharply
from 1997 to 2002 and reach the peak at
nearly
150, 000 in 2002.
Additionally
, the figure of female graduates increased
significantly
to 75, 000 in 1995, then
slightly
dropped to about 72, 000 in 2001. The number of female students graduated from university
significantly
from 2001 to 2007, with 80, 000 and 90, 000 in 2003 and 2006,
respectively
.
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