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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. PlrK
The given graphical image provides an clear illustration of the university graduates in the given time period of 1992 - 2007. The graphical extract has provided the analysis on gender basis. Firstly, the university graduates has been gradually increasing for the given time period in the case of both female and male candidates. However, it can be observed that the number of female graduates has been significantly higher than the male graduates in all the corresponding years. The rate of increase of both female and male graduates has been almost same for the first three years. In the period 1995 to 2001, the data points for female graduates has observed an trend that can be approximated to trend of a "bath tub curve". Whereas, in the same time period, the number of male candidates passing out from the university has seen a fluctuation intermittently. After 2001, the data points for both the candidates has visualized an increasing trend. The female candidates passing out from the university was only little lesser than 150, 000 graduates by 2006 in contrast to lesser than 100, 000 in 1992. The number of male graduates was only midway to 100, 000 in 2006. This implies that the female candidates passing out from the university had increased by around 50% in 16 years whereas data points for male graduates saw only around 25%.
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1992 - 2007
. The graphical extract has provided the analysis on gender basis.

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, the
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university
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graduates
has been
gradually
increasing for the
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in the case of both
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female
and male
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candidates
.
However
, it can
be observed
that the number of
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female
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graduates
has been
significantly
higher than the male
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graduates
in all the corresponding years. The rate of increase of both
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female
and male
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graduates
has been almost same for the
first
three years. In the
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period
1995 to 2001, the data points for
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female
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graduates
has observed
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an
trend that can
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bath tub curve
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. Whereas, in the same time
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, the number of male
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candidates
passing out from the
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university
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a fluctuation
intermittently
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has visualized an increasing trend. The
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female
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passing out from the
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university
was
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lesser than 150, 000
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graduates
by 2006
in contrast
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was
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midway to 100, 000 in 2006.
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the
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female
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candidates
passing out from the
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university
had increased by around 50% in 16 years whereas data points for male
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graduates
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around 25%.

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