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goods transport in uk years 1974 to 2000

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This line graph shows goods transportation by the road, water, rail and pipeline in UK in years 1974 to 2002. In 1974, Goods transport by road in nearly 70 millions tonnes and reached to nearly 100 tons in 2002. Similarly goods transport by water was around nearly 40 millions tones to and water 55 millions and steady till, 1994 theslights decrease then rise and closed at around 65 millions. rail transport goods transported by the yeras and close nearly talking about pipeline transport goods started in 1974 about 3 millions tons and continously rose and closed to 22 millions goodstransport in 2002.
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transportation by the road, water, rail and pipeline in UK in years 1974 to 2002.

In 1974,
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by road in
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70
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tonnes and reached to
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100 tons in 2002.
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by water was around
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40
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tones to and water 55
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and steady till, 1994
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decrease then rise and closed at around 65 millions.

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transported by the
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and close
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talking about pipeline
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in 1974 about 3
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tons and
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rose and closed to 22
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in 2002.

IELTS academic goods transport in uk years 1974 to 2000

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