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fast food in restaurants in USA

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This chart above demonstrates how regular people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. The regularity of eating fast food is divided by six category which includes every day, several times a week, once a week, once or twice a month, a few times in a year and never. In this essay, the data will be explained in detailed way. First of all, from 2003 to 2013 in the USA, the rate of fast food eater every day had never reached one in twenty. In 2003, people who eat fast food every day was around 5%, however in 2006 the number had slightly decreased. This rate can be counted as stabilized since the rate did not change in 2013. Also, in 2006 the ones who eat in fast food stores several times in a week demonstrates a little peak according to data in 2003. Furthermore, in 2013 the data demostrates a small fall. In 2013 these people are approximately over %15. There is another information that we can reach out by this graph. The ones who consume junk food rose when time groups are once in a week and once or twice time a month. According to this data, we can claim that %60 of American people consume fast food at least once time a month. In 2003 people who eat fast food once a week was a bit higher than the rate in 2013. However Number of the people who eat fast food once a week showed a peak in 2006. The amount of people who eat fast food once a week in 2006 and once or twice time a month in 2013 is the same. Lastly the ones who never spent their time by eating fast food was a small group.

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