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The graph demonstrates how many tourist visited the Caribbean island with two different types of staying from 2010 to 2017. In general, it is clear that, the total of visitors has slowly increase over years. The numbers from the type of staying on cruise is far more popular than staying on island, until it changes in the year 2015. Between 2016 to 2017 the total number jumped nearly one million. In the year of 2012, the gap between visitors who choose to stay in cruise than staying on island has increased. Visitor who choose to stay on island passed the number of visitor who choose tos tay in cruise ships between 2015 to 2016. At the same year, the number stay stable over the total number. There is a constant increase in total numbers. Also, staying in cruise ship is more popular than staying on island from 2010 to 2015.
The graph demonstrates how
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many tourist
visited the Caribbean
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island
with two
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different
types of
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staying
from 2010 to 2017.

In general
, it is
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clear
that, the
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total
of
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visitors
has
slowly
increase over years. The
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numbers
from the type of
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staying
on
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cruise
is far more popular than
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staying
on
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island
, until it
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changes
in the
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year
2015.
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Between 2016 to 2017
the
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total
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number
jumped
nearly
one million.

In the
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year
of 2012, the gap between
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visitors
who choose to stay in
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cruise
than
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staying
on
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island
has increased.
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Visitor
who choose to stay on
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island
passed the
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number
of
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visitor
who choose
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tos tay
in
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cruise
ships
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between 2015 to 2016
. At the same
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year
, the
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number
stay stable over the
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total
number.

There is a constant increase in
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total
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numbers
.
Also
,
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staying
in
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cruise
ship is more popular than
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staying
on
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island
from 2010 to 2015.

IELTS academic summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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