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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. 0Aw6Q
The line graph illustrates how the number of male and female university graduates varied in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Overall, Canada has higher number of female graduates than male gradutes over the period given and different kinds of fluctuations occured between 1992 and 2006. There were one lakh female graduates in 1992 where as 70000 graduates. There was steady raise in both categories upto 1995 maintaining the same difference as in 1992. And both categories have decline in 1995. And there was small change in between 1995 and 1999. But from 1999 to 2001 there was fluctuations in male graduates and steady increase in female graduates. But from 2001 to 2006 there was steady increase again. As years were passing the difference between number of female graduates and male graduates was nearly same till 1995 and it is increasing from 1995 to 2006 and it starts with 40000 differnce and ended with nearly 50000.
The line graph illustrates how the number of male and
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university
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graduates
varied in Canada from 1992 to 2007.
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, Canada has higher number of
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female
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graduates
than male
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gradutes
over the period
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given
and
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different
kinds of fluctuations
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occured
between 1992 and 2006.

There were one lakh
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female
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graduates
in 1992
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where as
70000
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graduates
. There was steady raise in both categories
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upto
1995 maintaining the same difference as in 1992. And both categories have decline in 1995. And there was
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small
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change
in between 1995 and 1999.
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But
from 1999 to 2001
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there was fluctuations
in male
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graduates
and steady increase in
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female
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graduates
.
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But
from 2001 to 2006 there was steady increase again.

As years were passing the difference between number of
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female
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graduates
and male
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graduates
was
nearly
same till 1995 and it is increasing from 1995 to 2006 and it
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starts
with 40000
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differnce
and ended with
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50000.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

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