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The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019 JoVK6
The charts illustrate worldwide exports of pinapple from the three main regions that grow pineapple in 2009 and 2019 and expenses breakdown of each fruit in 2019. The country A produced the most amount of pineapples in 2019 that reached more than 10 million tonnes. This was the highest point among all three countires withing both years. A country B exported 2 million tonnes more in 2009 than in 2019 reaching approximately 4, 3 million tonnes. The lowest points take country C with its 0, 3 million tonnes in the 2009 and slightly more in 2019 gaining 0. 5 million tonnes. The distrubution and retail of breakdown of the cost to the consumer each pineapple in 2019 takes 35% which is the biggest percentage among other factors. Significant parts of breakdown of the cost take profit and taxes reaching 18% and 16%. The producer and export costs are the least percentages - only 4% and 5% of the whole.
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from the three main regions that grow pineapple in 2009 and 2019 and expenses breakdown of each fruit in 2019.

The country A produced the most amount of pineapples in 2019 that reached more than 10
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tonnes. This was the highest point among all three
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withing both years. A country B exported 2
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tonnes more in 2009 than in 2019 reaching approximately 4, 3
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and retail of breakdown of the cost to the consumer each pineapple in 2019 takes 35% which is the biggest percentage among other factors. Significant parts of breakdown of the cost take profit and taxes reaching 18% and 16%. The producer and export costs are the least percentages
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IELTS academic The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019

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