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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. yyWr
The line graph illustrates the number of people who wen to visit a Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Overall, the visitors who decided to stay on the island have the higher number than the cruise ships groups. In 2010, there was about 700, 000 tourists who stayed on the island, and this figure remained the same until 2011. The number of visitors experienced a dramatical increase until 2015, hitting approximately 1. 5 millions people, before falling down afterward. On the other hand, around 250, 000 of people who want to stay on cruise ship in 2010 which roughly the same number of visitors in 2012. This figures witnessed a rapid growth along the period reaching 2 millions in 2017. When combining both staying choices in Caribbean island, it is obvious that the number of visitors was rising dramatically throughout the period which about 1 millions in the beginning year and approach 3. 5 millions visitors at the end in 2017.
The line graph illustrates the
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to visit a Caribbean
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between 2010 and 2017

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, the
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decided to stay on the
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have the higher
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than the cruise ships groups.

In 2010, there was about 700, 000 tourists
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stayed on the
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, and this figure remained the same until 2011. The
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of
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experienced a
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dramatical
increase until 2015, hitting approximately 1. 5
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,
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falling down afterward.
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, around 250, 000 of
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want to stay on cruise ship in 2010 which roughly the same
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in 2012.
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figures witnessed a rapid growth along the period reaching 2
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millions
in 2017.

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in Caribbean
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, it is obvious that the
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was rising
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in the beginning year and approach 3. 5
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at the
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in 2017.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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