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the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The graph illustrates millions of people who have visited Caribbean Island from 2010 until 2017. It also describes the number of visitors who will stay on cruise, island, and the total of them. Overall, the total of tourists who were visiting the island were high over a period, starting from 1 million in 2010 until reaching 3. 5 millions. Then, the rest two lines shown that visitors who are staying on cruise are less than island. However, the number of people who like to stay on island has a rapid surge until the end of the year. In the early 2010, the number of visitors on cruise has increased until 2011, but declined in 2012 and rose again until the end of the period, exceeding the total of people who stayed on island. Next, there are more than 0. 5 million of people who stayed on island in 2011. After that, the number has growth to 1. 5 million in 2015. Yet, it has decreased in 2016 but rose again in 2017 and got 1. 5 million visitors.
The graph illustrates
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, and the total of them.

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were visiting the
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were high over a period, starting from 1
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in 2010 until reaching 3. 5
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millions
. Then, the rest two lines shown that
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visitors
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are staying on cruise are less than
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island
.
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, the
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like to stay on
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has a rapid surge until the
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declined in 2012 and rose again until the
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in 2011. After that, the
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in 2015.
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