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The chart below shows the results survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Given chart illustrates the percentage of demanding coffee and tea among people who live in five Austalian cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. Overall, it can be seen that visiting cafe is the most popular almost in every city, while buying fresh coffee for own is the least popular. Byuing coffee usually happens in Sydney, here it reaches 44 percent in the last four weeks. And in Brisbane results show thaht onle 34 percent of people demand fresh coffee and tea. Furthermore, using instant coffee much more popular in every city. Just over 45 percent of Sydney citizens prefer using instant coffee. The peak of using instant coffee related to people who live in Hobart, where it shows approximately 55 percent. Subsequently, visiting cafe for having a coffee and tea is the most common habit in every city, except Adelaide. In Sydney, Hobart and Melbourne the percentage is much higher, almost 63 percent. In other two cities there are no big fluctuations. In Brisbane it is only 2 percent higher than using instant ones, whereas in Adelaide this amount is lower for 2 percent.
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much more popular in every city.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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