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The graph below shows the number of students who received scholarships to study at the university of Aston over three different areas from January to May 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of students who received scholarships to study at the university of Aston over three different areas from January to May 2021. D2Yb6
The line graph demonstrates how many students received scholarships to study at the university of Aston over three various Asian countries namely Vietnam, Singapore and Laos during the period between January and May 2021. It is clear from the chart that while the number of students who received scholarships to study at the university of Aston in Vietnam and Laos increased dramatically, the number of students studying abroad in Laos fluctuated over the period shown. Overall, the students in Vietnam are by far the most popular means of people to receive scholarships. In January, there was 1 student in Vietnam and 22 students in Singapore respectively who received scholarships to study at the university of Aston, whereas the number of people who received scholarship in Laos is the lowest with 0 people. In March, the number of pupils who would be studying at Aston university in Vietnam rose gradually to 4 people. The figure for Singapore declined remarkably by 14 people. On the other hand, the number of students who received scholarships in Laos still stayed the same during a little more than two months. In May, there was a dramatic increase in the amount of students who have the opportunity to study abroad at Aston university in Vietnam, from 8 students to 82 students. Besides, the number of students who received scholarships to study at the university of Aston in both Singapore and Laos grew up significantly to 19 people and 35 people respectively.
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of Aston over three various Asian countries
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of Aston in Vietnam and Laos increased
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studying abroad in Laos fluctuated over the period shown.
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in Vietnam are by far the most popular means of
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to receive scholarships.

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in Vietnam and 22
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abroad at Aston
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in Vietnam, from 8
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to 82
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of students who received scholarships to study at the university of Aston over three different areas from January to May 2021.

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