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The graph below shows the number of people employed in a European country by age and gender. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of people employed in a European country by age and gender. 65k3

The bar chart shows some information on the number of people employed in a European country by age and gender. The data are available for 2013. As an overall trend, it can be clearly seen that the age number of people employed are females in a European country. As it shown by the chart, the share of males employed is significantly higher than those ones of the females. It is figure 55000 thousand of males to aged 40-44 years. It is interesting to note that the 75 years old people have the smallest number. They are approximately 5000 thousands of employees.

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 employed in a European country by age and gender. The data are available for 2013.

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 of the females. It is figure 55000 thousand of males to aged 40-44 years.

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