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The maps illustrate the current and predicted future Islip town centre.

The maps illustrate the current and predicted future Islip town centre. 0AEN1

Overall, it is clear from the maps that some pedestrianisation is planned for shopping and housing area, while a new road for vehicles is planned to frame this area. Focusing on the current map, the town center is developed around a main road, which stretches from the west to the east. There are many shops to the north and to the south of the road. Whilst it is mainly consisted of the countryside in the north, a big area is occupied by housing in the south. This area is limited by a park in the east and a school in the south-west. Both of these structures are connected to the main road by side roads. Moving on to the predictions, a circular road that goes around the city center attracts attention. This road expected to be built is a dual carriageway. The middle part of the main road is projected to be pedestrianised. Although the southern part of Islip is not designated to see big changes other than some new housing and a shrink in the size of the park, there are many changes planned for the northern part. Shops in this part will be demolished and a shopping centre and a housing area will be introduced. A bus station and a parking area are also planned to be built to the west and the east of the shopping centre, respectively.

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 to frame this area.

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current
 map, the town center is developed
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road
 by side roads.

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road
 that goes around the city center attracts attention. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
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expected
 to be built
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 new housing and a shrink in the size of the park, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
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